tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982069049641262423.post3133400321728030000..comments2024-01-01T21:34:29.568-06:00Comments on C.J. Redwine: "Read this," she said firmly.C.J. Redwinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18133349802945244028noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982069049641262423.post-32226457791931601662008-08-27T10:56:00.000-05:002008-08-27T10:56:00.000-05:00I do a Find for "ly" and then see if I can replace...I do a Find for "ly" and then see if I can replace it with action. =)C.J. Redwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18133349802945244028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982069049641262423.post-52979038477029284052008-08-27T01:34:00.000-05:002008-08-27T01:34:00.000-05:00Excellent post! I tend to use quite a few adverbs...Excellent post! I tend to use quite a few adverbs and a ton of passive voice in the first draft, just to get the story out. I also will have large blocks of dialogue and large blocks of description. LOL Then I go through the manuscript and edit as much as I can out of it. =)Jinxie Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00614376910387330818noreply@blogger.com